post lunchtime haiku

[low_delta]

when I got hungry
I had a creme filled doughnut
not hungry for lunch

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[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

a limerick~

today pizza would have abounded
if paul arntson had not absconded
with six slices for him
the numbers got slim
so i'm stuck with doritos, confound it

[cynnerth.livejournal.com]

*wild applause*

[specificocean.livejournal.com]

I was NOT hungry
Having had lunch
I read
Your haiku
and craved food

[low-delta.livejournal.com]

I got hungry and ate lunch
shortly thereafter

[banana.livejournal.com]

I had sushi with soy sauce
Vegetarian, of course
I ate under the trees
With the sushi on my knees
Then I had felafel
Which doesn't rhyme

[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

I had some soup;
some viscous vile goop,
and a samich I bought-er,
from a guy full of hauter
that wasn't real nice,
nor worth such a price....

So now I have to say,
I'll pack a lunch more often every day....

[cynnerth.livejournal.com]

One of these days I want to see you "rap" your lunch. LOL!!

[ravengirl.livejournal.com]

whoa, quite ambitious!
"hauter"'s good!

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[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

I was struggling, yes I was:)

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[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

Hmmmmm....

I think I can do that....

[banana.livejournal.com]

I was expecting a daughter. 8~)

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[msfledermaus.livejournal.com]

Oooog....

[jetler.livejournal.com]

OMG!!! That is fantastic! Good job!